Saturday, August 30, 2008

Saturated...so..SUICIDE!




Subdued sulken Sun…
Saturine swifting streams…
Static spiritless silence…
Shrinking sanguine smiles…
Somber sublunary…
Shades stodgy...
Superficial solicitude...
Sabatral sterile…
Screaming Soul…
Such screams..
Sometimes….

Soul’s strangle
Slayed..
Sometimes submissive
Suicide!!!

6 comments:

Soumya said...

'S'plendid 'S'rishtibution !! An experience this one !

Sunita said...

Subdued alliterations .....loved the flow.....:)

Ri said...

painful

Shewolf said...

reading you after long..
this was a different piece, well crafted, stark.

Shiv... said...

My favorite letter...

Bharath said...

"yeS"
"yeS"

"Superb"
"Swashbuckling!"
"Striking"